Sunday, November 1, 2009

Haiku 110109

receding sea
a crab creeps up
the sand castle






10 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

And he becomes the king.

gautami tripathy said...

Very vivid..

deathly adventure

Also don't forget to post any of your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!

Amity Me said...

that's what we often see along the beach after a wave has come ashore then back...:)

zoya gautam said...

.. a democratic king .. i wish ..

Carlos Gesmundo said...

zoya gautam -- Yes! A democratic head, with the interests of his people in his heart.

Dalloway said...

very good

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Amity Me -- Similar experiences -- the stuff that bind us.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

gautami tripathy -- thanks for the invitation.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Dalloway -- thank you for your comment and for visiting.

gabrielle said...

it is in these moments that life breathes.