Friday, November 27, 2009

Haiku 112709

frosty grass
fellow riders avoid
her cold eyes



13 comments:

Shannon O'Donnell said...

This one kind of gives me the chills! I love it.

I teach high school writing and poetry. May I use you as a contemporary poet in my Haiku lessons and share some of your work with my students?

Devika said...

Great haiku, Carlos...and a good set below...

very interesting blog, will keep visiting :)

wishes,
devika

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

great haiku!!

i liked it..

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice work!

The Dark Lord said...

Loved the haiku.. You express much, and there's a lot of scope for interpretation!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Shannon, you may certainly use this blog's resources for your class. :) And be sure to check out other haiku sites, too. There are better haiku out there.

Best regards.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Devika, thank you for your kind words. Peace!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Shraddha, I'm glad you liked this piece. Your comments are always appreciated.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

J. Andrew -- thanks for visiting and for your note.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

The Dark Lord -- I'm glad you liked what you saw. Regards.

Devika said...

Yes Carlos, I have always found my peace within...May you find your piece of peace too! :)

wishes,
devika

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Devika, I have been working on it -- my piece of Peace. Thanks. :)

Devika said...

:)

devika