Wednesday, June 2, 2010

evening tryst 
she smiles on seeing 
the moonrise 










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*For One Single Impression, Prompt: Love

19 comments:

Dina Spice said...

Anticipation of a night of love - how wonderful!

- Dina

Pearl said...

nice. seeing the context, I can see the smile.

Rudi Pfaller said...
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Rudi Pfaller said...

I wonder who "she" is.
I like the mood in this moonrise.
Well done.
Rudi

Amity said...

The feeling is just weird, but it's love, I know!

SandyCarlson said...

This hurts so much I am silent. Beautiful poem.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

... naughty anticipation ... :)

Thanks, Dina Spice.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

A smile that was teasing ...

Thanks, Pearl.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

She's the one who waits not only for the moonrise...

Thanks, Rudi.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

It is what you think and feel it is -- that feeling that creates such anticipation.

Thanks, Amity.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

This perspective intrigues me ...

Thanks, Sandy.

Magyar said...

las estrellas
esta cita magica
cancion suave

Yours, so nicely done, Carlos!

_m

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Magyar,

Thanks for the wonderful verse you left and the kind comments.

I can imagine sparkling stars after a magical moment, with an Astrud Gilberto song in the background! :)

Appreciate the visit.

Best regards.

Jacque said...

Seguidor......... Por Cumpleaños del Che Guevara, AMOR REVOLUCIONARIO........

Gracias

Ralf Bröker said...

I love the sound turning from long ees and smooth s into a clear and slow "...rise...".

Best wishes
Ralf

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Jacque -- Thanks for the reminder. Che was an unselfish man.

Abrazos.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Hi Ralf.

As always, thanks for the thoughtful comments. :)

Best regards.

Aayushi Mehta said...

Loved this.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks you, Aayushi.