Sunday, June 20, 2010

first summer sun 
in the shadows she espies 
a blackbird 






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For One Single Impression, Prompt: Dawn

25 comments:

Marcel Peltier said...

I like this one very much.

Aayushi Mehta said...

This is great.

Pam said...

Subtly ominous - i love the blackbird leaping out in the last line.

Karol Rosiak said...

Great atmosphere of this haiku.
Good one.

K.

Leo said...

hi Carlos.. really lovely haiku! :)
thanks very much!

Sandy said...

It happens here, too.

SandyCarlson said...

Makes me think a storm is coming!

Tammie said...

lovely to have a feel of your summer day.

Sandra (if) said...

I can see that Carlos...:)

Shraddha said...

that is very nice..

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thank you -- Marcel and Aayushi!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Pam,

I almost leapt when it landed out of nowhere and headed for the shadows!

Thanks.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks, Karol and Leo!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Seems like they're visiting more often .... Thanks, Sandy.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Sandy C -- It did rain a bit sometime after. Thanks.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks, Tammie.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thanks for visiting, Sandra.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Hi Shraddha. Thanks.

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, superb! Slinking is a perfect word - visual and vivid.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Excellent Ku my friend. Well done....


Melanie

one more believer said...

summer's first sun, great line in the ku... it is truly as simple as that...

Short Poems said...

Hi Carlos, really BEAUTIFUL haiku.
Warmly
Marinela x

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thank you, Tumblewords and Cassiopeia!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

one more believer -- Happy Summer Solstice!

Regards.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Marinela -- Thanks!