I love the remembrance in this piece... coming home and finding an old puzzle one used to play with and not finding all the pieces. Oh! how lovely... hope you have a good time.
This is beautiful, and so poignant too! The joy of homecoming and the sense of loss at being unable to join the dots - a world less and less familiar as time passes. Ah!
This is beautiful, and so poignant too! The joy of homecoming and the sense of loss at being unable to join the dots - a world less and less familiar as time passes. Ah!
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I love the remembrance in this piece... coming home and finding an old puzzle one used to play with and not finding all the pieces. Oh! how lovely... hope you have a good time.
Good.
Sempre bom lembrar...
Nana,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Have a great week ahead!
Carlos
Henrique,
Thanks! Yes, although it is sometimes sad, it is also good to remember old friends and comrades.
Best wishes.
Carlos
Carlos,
I really like.
Have a good weekend. Best vishes,
Karol
Karol -- Thanks!
Have a great week ahead.
Carlos
Good haiku to speak of that occasion, Carlos...old friends, some of them we never even knew each other -- like a jigsaw piece :)
wishes,
devika
Hi Devika.
As always, I appreciate your comments. Have a great week ahead!
Best wishes.
Carlos
bang on ! simple in reading but dee thoughts :)
Beautiful beautiful haiku!
ladynimue -- Appreciate your comments and visit!
Good wishes.
Carlos
Hi Ruchira --Thanks! I really appreciate your comments.
Good wishes.
Carlos
This is beautiful, and so poignant too!
The joy of homecoming and the sense of loss at being unable to join the dots - a world less and less familiar as time passes. Ah!
This is beautiful, and so poignant too!
The joy of homecoming and the sense of loss at being unable to join the dots - a world less and less familiar as time passes. Ah!
Hi nimaruichi -- Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Thanks for your visit, too!
Best wishes.
Carlos
lovely Haiku..
your talent soars.
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Dear poet, welcome join Jingle Poetry Potluck…
First time participants can link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme…
We value your contribution and cherish your talent!
Hope to see you soon,
xxx
Thank you, Morning! For the comments and the invitation.
Carlos
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