Friday, January 7, 2011

virgin snow
the diary's first page
still untouched






21 comments:

Rudi Pfaller said...

I love this!
"Virgin snow" and "first page" work together very well.
Nevertheless you should write down a first haiku on the first page...
Sorry, I suppose this text was the first one.

Have a nice and creative 2011!
Best wishes
Rudi

Karol Rosiak said...

Yes, Carlos. Excellently.

Wishes,
Karol

LadyArt said...

lovely haiku, i am delighted... thank you for sharing

sandy said...

What is better? A new tablet or a new year?
I like this.

Bernd Balder said...

Many foot steps coming ... And like the hesitation to be the first one to step into the peaceful snow is the feeling to write the first text into a new diary.
Nice text.

Ciao,
Bernd

ρομπερτ said...

Measurement of time and life received a new meaning. Great, great piece indeed. Please have a good weekend.


daily athens

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thank you, Rudi. This verse became the first successful entry.

Have a great 2011!

Best regards.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Karol -- thank you! Best wishes for a new year.

Carlos

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thank you, Lady Art! Have a great year ahead.

Carlos

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Whichever offers great possibilities, I suppose.

Thanks for visiting, Sandy. Appreciate the question.

Best wishes for the new year.

Carlos

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Bernd,

I appreciate the thoughtful comments. Have a great creative year!

Carlos

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Robert, thanks for the kind words.

Have a great weekend and a peaceful new year as well. Things will get better.

Best regards.

Carlos

Orston said...

I really love this haiku.
Best wishes for 2011, Carlos!

Warm greetings,

Marek

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Hi Marek.

Thank you. And congratulations for placing in The Mainichi Haiku contest! You're off to a great, creative start in 2011, Master Haijin!

Regards.

Carlos

Tikkis said...

This term "virgin snow" is fascinating!

We have second rainy day after 1.5 months snowy and cold period here!

Ordering a cottage for a week from Lappland...

carlos gesmundo said...

Hi Juhani.

Thank you for your comments and visit.

Do you think you'll have more rain coming instead of snow? =)

Have a great break from the snow and cold!

Regards.

Carlos

Sympathy for The Devil said...

wanted to say THANK YOUUUUU for the little haiku you posted on my blog, ALL BEAUTIFUL!


wish you a nice day, hope to see you and virgin snow in Pepperland!

x

Jani said...

Hi there!This is really nice blog!:)

Jani

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Jani -- Thanks for your comments!

Beatrice V said...

Love it!

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Thank you, Beatrice!