haiku! (i think.)

Sunday, June 19, 2011

moon eclipse

this loss of face

so brief

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Published in Haiku in English, Daily Haiku Selection, Mainichi Japan, June 14, 2011

Karol Rosiak said...: Good one, Carlos.

K.; June 19, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Carlos Gesmundo said...: Thank you, Karol. Have a good week ahead.; June 19, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Karol Rosiak said...: Thanks, Carlos, and you too.

- Karol; June 19, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Anonymous said...: Yes, a good one!
Our last full moon was quite red. (red faced); June 20, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Carlos Gesmundo said...: Sandy -- Thanks for your comment. Here's one for your red-faced moon:

red full moon
strolling with the new girl
at dusk -- he tripped

Regards.; June 21, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Karol Rosiak said...: "red full moon
strolling with the new girl
at dusk -- he tripped"

:)K.; June 21, 2011 at 1:57 PM