Saturday, July 24, 2010

the little girl whispers
new angel wings

For One Single Impression, Prompt: Angel


Devika Jyothi said...

Love little girls - always in their imaginations.... Love a chrysalis too...But this "angel" is a very 'unfamiliar' species! :)

kidding, nice haiku Carlos :)


Sandra.if said...

innocent true...!

Anonymous said...

What a joy to feel, read in the middle of the night.

daily athens

Amity said...

Hi Carlos;

This angel of yours...innocence portrayed...loved it!

By the way, please join us at Haiku Heights Carlos, a new meme hosted by my blog pal Leo...

I know you're seasoned *ku-er* so I am inviting you to join us.

Here is the link:

See you there soon!!!

Patti said...

Love that imagery- perfect!

Vinay Leo R. said...

very wonderful imagery in ur haiku Carlos :) it was a very nice read.!

SandyCarlson said...

A good and beautiful way to see things.

Tumblewords: said...

I love the innocence of the child and the magic of nature. Beautiful!

Ramesh Sood said...

Beautiful.. I am getting acquainted with Haikus..shall try sometime..or shall I try one here..

"New angel wings"
Noisely fluttering
Silence stays

Visit me and tell me how do you find it.. dear..

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Anonymous said...

Hi Carlos,
I like the onomatopoeia:
With these many [s] I can here the little girl whispering.
Well done!