I like this one very much.
This is great.
Subtly ominous - i love the blackbird leaping out in the last line.
Great atmosphere of this haiku.Good one.K.
hi Carlos.. really lovely haiku! :)thanks very much!
It happens here, too.
Makes me think a storm is coming!
lovely to have a feel of your summer day.
I can see that Carlos...:)
that is very nice..
Thank you -- Marcel and Aayushi!
Pam, I almost leapt when it landed out of nowhere and headed for the shadows!Thanks.
Thanks, Karol and Leo!
Seems like they're visiting more often .... Thanks, Sandy.
Sandy C -- It did rain a bit sometime after. Thanks.
Thanks for visiting, Sandra.
Hi Shraddha. Thanks.
Ah, superb! Slinking is a perfect word - visual and vivid.
Excellent Ku my friend. Well done....Melanie
summer's first sun, great line in the ku... it is truly as simple as that...
Hi Carlos, really BEAUTIFUL haiku.WarmlyMarinela x
Thank you, Tumblewords and Cassiopeia!
one more believer -- Happy Summer Solstice!Regards.
Marinela -- Thanks!
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