I like this one very much.
This is great.
Subtly ominous - i love the blackbird leaping out in the last line.
Great atmosphere of this haiku.Good one.K.
hi Carlos.. really lovely haiku! :)thanks very much!
It happens here, too.
Makes me think a storm is coming!
lovely to have a feel of your summer day.
I can see that Carlos...:)
that is very nice..
Thank you -- Marcel and Aayushi!
Pam, I almost leapt when it landed out of nowhere and headed for the shadows!Thanks.
Thanks, Karol and Leo!
Seems like they're visiting more often .... Thanks, Sandy.
Sandy C -- It did rain a bit sometime after. Thanks.
Thanks, Tammie.
Thanks for visiting, Sandra.
Hi Shraddha. Thanks.
Ah, superb! Slinking is a perfect word - visual and vivid.
Excellent Ku my friend. Well done....Melanie
summer's first sun, great line in the ku... it is truly as simple as that...
Hi Carlos, really BEAUTIFUL haiku.WarmlyMarinela x
Thank you, Tumblewords and Cassiopeia!
one more believer -- Happy Summer Solstice!Regards.
Marinela -- Thanks!
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I like this one very much.
This is great.
Subtly ominous - i love the blackbird leaping out in the last line.
Great atmosphere of this haiku.
Good one.
K.
hi Carlos.. really lovely haiku! :)
thanks very much!
It happens here, too.
Makes me think a storm is coming!
lovely to have a feel of your summer day.
I can see that Carlos...:)
that is very nice..
Thank you -- Marcel and Aayushi!
Pam,
I almost leapt when it landed out of nowhere and headed for the shadows!
Thanks.
Thanks, Karol and Leo!
Seems like they're visiting more often .... Thanks, Sandy.
Sandy C -- It did rain a bit sometime after. Thanks.
Thanks, Tammie.
Thanks for visiting, Sandra.
Hi Shraddha. Thanks.
Ah, superb! Slinking is a perfect word - visual and vivid.
Excellent Ku my friend. Well done....
Melanie
summer's first sun, great line in the ku... it is truly as simple as that...
Hi Carlos, really BEAUTIFUL haiku.
Warmly
Marinela x
Thank you, Tumblewords and Cassiopeia!
one more believer -- Happy Summer Solstice!
Regards.
Marinela -- Thanks!
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