Fine observation and an important motive: seeing the great things in small things. I wish this worm survived and gave an idea about dimensions. Everything is relative. I see a metaphor for this abstract of time and space.
Thanks for visiting and following Bleeding Moon Poetry. I must tell you that this is one classy little haiku... i can actually see that worm inching its way along. Brilliantly written about such a simple everyday occurrence.
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Fine observation and an important motive: seeing the great things in small things.
I wish this worm survived and gave an idea about dimensions. Everything is relative.
I see a metaphor for this abstract of time and space.
Very interesting! I like it very much!
Best wishes
Rudi
Whenever there is time to do it, I stop and carry them to a better place. A few days ago I saw our children (14 and 8) do the same. I was so proud.
Best wishes
Ralf
Carlos,
I like it very much.
Best wishes,
K.
Rudi, Ralf and Karol -- Thank you for visiting and for leaving comments!
Best wishes.
Carlos
Gracioso, muito bom!
Henrique,
Sorry, I came across your note just now. Thanks for visiting .. and thanks for your kind comments!
Best wishes.
Carlos
Lovely!
Lovely!
Thanks for visiting and following Bleeding Moon Poetry. I must tell you that this is one classy little haiku... i can actually see that worm inching its way along. Brilliantly written about such a simple everyday occurrence.
Thank you, Catherine. Appreciate your visit and your kind comments.
Good wishes.
Carlos
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